I created a weight with a heart around it and added text to the bottem of my design. I created this because it went along with my theme of fitness and health. It displayed how fitness is important for your body and mind, which are the words I put at the bottom of my logo design.? This relates because I believe it is important for people to understand that fitness does not only affect your physical appearance and look but it effects your mental health and your body on the inside. I just thought of my deign because as I have said fitness and health go hand in hand so I decided to take two things that are important and make it into my logo design. Within my design I first used the pen to cut out a hear shape then draw the line connecting the weights to the heart. I also used the shaped to make the ends of the weights and Next, I used text at the bottom of the design. A problem that I encountered while working on this draft logo design was making the heart because at first, I thought I would be able to make the heart with some shapes that I would put together and move, but instead I used the pen to make a more precise heart and it turned out to be a little bit easier. I also had a difficult time making the line heart beats within the heart because they kept filling in with black. But then I went to the color box and turned the fill off and make the lines black so that they would show up how I wanted it to. Overall, I and really happy with how my draft logo design turned out and cannot wait to hear feedback.

I really do love the idea around your logo and really makes me want to try and workout more ahaha. Something that maybe should be worked on is that after reading what your logo was about, was when I knew what was on the side of your heart. I wasn’t really sure what to make of it but now I know it is a weight. Maybe to make it more clear is making the lines thicker are looking up a picture of a weight and try to copy it. Another item is maybe adding some colors. Maybe not to your logo itself but the writing on the bottom. Just to add a little color to bring more attention to your logo. Other than these few things your logo itself and the logic behind it is very good and your idea for the logo is so cute.
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Overall, I really like your design, I like how simple it is and it is easy to see the concept you were going for. My favorite part is the heart in the middle of the dumb bells. You used many elements of illustrator in your design which is also good. If I was to change anything I would add some color or add something to make your logo stand out more. The words at the bottom of your logo fit very well into your design and everything looks very symmetrical. Another element of your design that I like and I think works very well is the heart beat, it helps to portray what your theme is and the simplicity of it works well with the rest of your design. I also like the font you have chosen for your logo, as well as the overall placement of the text.
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I like your project’s design a lot. There are a few things that I think can help for your final. The first suggestion is to add some color. Maybe you could make the heart red or something. The second suggestion I have is about the weights. I was confused when I first looked at the weights. Maybe instead of using oval shapes, you could use rectangles and make the corners rounded. The overall design of your project is really creative and looks good, I just think some color and fine tuning could help for your final draft.
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Nice job on incorporating 2 different thoughts of fitness together into one logo. I feel like the barbell attached to the heart beat line going through the heart is a very clever idea. I do think that adding color could potentially increase your ability to convey your point and grab the attention of those who are viewing your logo for the first time. Maybe making the heart red with a black line and colored weights. Overall your idea is spectacular and only needs a little color in my opinion.
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I really enjoyed looking at your logo draft. I did a similar one using the weights and what I did was used the rectangle tool and made the pointed corners into rounded. So my first criticism would be to make the weights appear more like a weight bar. Another criticism which is something I’m sure you are aware of is to add color. When adding color I would suggest using the gradient tool to add a little depth to the heart and weights. I really like the base that you have, the heart looks great and I really like the heartbeat that you put in the middle of it. I like the meanings of the weights and the heart that you put into it. It shows that you actually put effort towards the project. Keep up the good work!
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